Sweet!
Yeh its tight! Its like a powerpoppunk song lrically going mario style! Some of ur stuff is eh......rip off of poppunk bands and some of ur stuff is brillant.I think this is really brillant.The powerchords are sweet and it reminds me of Brendon Small's stuff he did for Home Movies and it sort of also has a "Superchunk" vibe to it too which is cool.Great Job!